Ah, zombies. Not a bad story, but I think zombies are becoming a bit overused, almost cliché. This is why I'm glad you never actually used the word "zombie" anywhere in the story... but at the same time, it's pretty clear that one needs to know exactly what zombies are in order to understand this story, as your explanation of what's going on is minimal.

Also, this doesn't directly pertain to your story, but when did everyone start calling "zombification" an infection? I'm assuming it was after Resident Evil came out. It was cool then, but I think modernizing the idea of "zombies" by treating it like a disease has lost its charm, just like putting vampires in a modern setting and giving them their own subculture. We need a return to the good old days, when the undead were sent back to their graves by exorcists and priests... with chainsaws.

Fucking brilliant. Did you make this yourself?

Religious zombie stories? Okay, I can't think of any either. When I mentioned exorcists and priests, I was thinking more along the lines of occult, rather than religion. On that note, if you like comedy, I recommend the Evil Dead series.

Dude! You're comment on 'The Torture Game 2' was featured on Fox when they were bagging on the poor game! Congrats!!! :D

You, sir, are a greater writer than I. That's no great accomplishment, but this story was freakin amazing. I actually checked to see if this was the second part or something. Anyway, this was really great and if you actually have the drive you could probably make a pretty decent zombie book.
So did you win that writing contest you mentioned in Spartan204's response?